Making Decisions About the Use of Technology in Education and Training: Using AI feedback

 When I check my writing with AI, I think my ideas are clear, but I still need to improve the way I express them in English. In my paragraph, I was able to organize the text with an introduction, advantages, disadvantages, and a conclusion. I also used some connectors like On the one hand, On the other hand, and In conclusion, which helped me give structure to my ideas. However, I can see that AI tells me that I need to be more precise, more natural, and better developed.



The answers for the reading were: 1b, 2c, 3d, 4a, 5c, 6d


The feedback from AI:

Aspect

My Writing

How I Can Improve

Clarity of ideas

My main ideas are understandable, and my opinion is clear.

I should explain my ideas with more detail and use clearer sentences.

Organization

My text has a basic structure: introduction, advantages, disadvantages, and conclusion.

I should make sure each paragraph focuses on one idea and has better transitions.

Use of connectors

I use some connectors like On the one hand, On the other hand, and In conclusion.

I should use more connectors, such as However, Moreover, In addition, Therefore, and Nevertheless.

Grammar accuracy

My writing has some grammatical mistakes, especially in sentence structure and word order.

I should check verb forms, articles, prepositions, and sentence order more carefully.

Vocabulary

My vocabulary is enough to communicate my ideas, but it is sometimes repetitive or translated from Spanish.

I should learn more academic words and avoid literal translation from Spanish.

Sentence structure

Some of my sentences are too long and confusing.

I should write shorter sentences and connect ideas more clearly.

Development of arguments

I mention advantages and disadvantages, but some ideas are not fully explained.

I should add more support and explanation to each point.

Academic tone

My writing sounds partly academic, but some expressions are informal.

I should replace informal words like ok with more formal ones like useful or appropriate.

Conclusion

My conclusion is clear and summarizes my opinion.

I should make my conclusion stronger and more formal.

According to the AI, some af the areas I need to work with are:




In conclusion, I really appreciate this way of using AI to improve writing skills. Now I can follow a plan to improve, and I also have a clear model to guide me.    


Comments

  1. Teacher NayMay 20, 2026 at 4:05 PM

    It is good that you appreciate the use of AII also reflects about the positive way to include it as a tool for feedback and learning.

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